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Ribs chicken potato salad music fire crackers--a typical Fourth of July cookout The whole family was together laughing joking and reminiscing on old times Then suddenly one of the jokes was taken the wrong way That wasnt even funny You dont go around telling none of my business I dont tell yours said the outraged teen to her mother It was just a joke get over it said the mother in a frightened yet a joking tone All eyes including mine were on those two As I watched the argument I saw a side of my younger cousin that I had never seen before or at least that had never been that bad She showed no respect for my Aunt calling her all the bs and hs in the world saying curse words that I was not aware that she knew I was shocked at how my Aunt reacted she acted in a way that contradicted what she had discussed with my mother and me She was 39 years old yet her 15-year-old daughter was talking to her as if she was the parent Ooh Momma can we get this Yeah Momma please Asked two eager 7 and 11 year olds who just happens to be my little sister Jessica and me Our mother responds in a harsh tone No put it back and get back over here My mother was and still is not afraid to tell us no when we want something My Aunt Brenda on the other hand is one of the easiest people you will ever come by My cousin Margie is one of the rudest most disrespectful children you could ever come across Brenda I want this All right put it in the buggy Says my Aunt agreeably Margie never says Mom may I please have this She does not ask She demands My Aunt is so nice and my cousin just takes advantage of her as if she does
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