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Have you ever met a person that has had a life changing impact in your life Well I know I have The day I met Mr Salazar I had many problems going on in my life when I was in the sixth grade He gave me advice and treated me as if I was his own daughterIn the year two thousand and eleven I met Mr Salazar I remember he walked in during my Spanish class I thought it was awkward because he looked and acted very professional In that moment I thought to myself this person is going to have a great impact in my life I was very curious to meet him and get a chance to show him my personalityI had many problems going on when I was in the sixth grade I was scared of my future actions and I felt I was lost in the moment Days passed and I had realized that something weird was happening I never went to a teacher because I was scared they would over react to the whole situation I decided to give it a try You never know whos down there frying those eggs if you do not stand up and seeI chose Mr Salazar as my adviser We talked about possible solutions to the problems We got further into the conversation and in that moment everything around me stopped I realized this person was the most precious treasure I had in school He was the only person I could talk to when I had problems He treated me with respect honor and appreciationNow you can see This teacher has had a great impact in my life Now he is my best friend We talk life old friends We give advice to one another and understand each other Think about it Who has caused a life changing
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