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E B Whites The Ring of Time is a wonderful story about a circus and all the excitement and entertainment but most of his attention is focused on a young rider Although the plot of the story is attention-grabbing what makes it jump out more is the format Since the beginning to end White explains everything with great detail The use of imagery symbolism syntax voice and diction help the reader gain better understand and comprehension of what taking placeWhites amazing use of imagery helps the reader see the things that are taking place her hands hang easily at her sides her head erect her straw-colored ponytail lightly brushing her shoulder the blood of exertion showing faintly through the tan of her skin White 2 By explaining every detail the reader can paint a vivid image in their head and see the color of the ponytail or how tan her skin is Another factor that contributes to the imagery of the article is the way the story flows White moves form phase and it help the story flow better and you can see how the story is moving from one scene to another In his opening paragraph he had just finishing seeing the lions return to their cages and slowly moves to the ring where the setting of the story takes place Each one of these elements helps the story have a clear image and you can see everything that is taking place within the story The diction in this article is outstanding The word usage helps the reader grasp a better understanding of the passage a little bunch of us drifted away and into an open doorway nearby where we stood for a while in semi-darkness watching a big brown circus horse go harrumphing around the practice ring White 1 The word usage here is great by stating that they drifted away adds a better tone to the passage He used drifted
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