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"Your writing is compelling and dynamic thanks to well-crafted flow and sentence variety, carrying the reader along smoothly and raising some thought-provoking points. Good control of diction and syntax, and correct mechanics, likewise ensure a solid reading experience for your audience.
Thanks to the abovementioned qualities of the prose, the discussion and organization feel organic, but as a thesis-driven essay, the purpose of the paper itself remains a little uncertain. Addressing this might entail adjusting the paragraph order to frontload the thesis or purpose, incorporating evidence that helps highlight the main focus (from the text if it's a commentary on the film, or from cases if it's a commentary on the justice system, or studies if it's on human behavior), or explicit signposting to remind the reader of the paper's purpose. Some minor corrections may also help clarify your approach, as well, such as the reference to "the book" versus the film."
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Kibin. (2024). Human nature and american justice in twelve angry men. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/human-nature-and-american-justice-in-twelve-angry-men-b8kuAOC3
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