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Beep Beep Beeeep That was all I heard in my hospital room My name is Aubrey Im six and I was diagnosed with cancer when I was five I have blue eyes as sparkly as the sea and no hair on my bald yet shiny head My mom says I got my eyes from dad and he says I got them from mom Im laying in my hospital bed which is two times bigger than me Mommy finally got done talking to the doctor Shes sitting at the end of my bed crying She doesnt tell me why so Im a little scared Daddy and Abbie walk in and dad sat next to mom and Abbie asks me if I want to go to the play place I say yes On the way I ask her why mom is crying She picks me up and says Mommy is crying because the chemo isnt working and there are going to stop and see what happens from there Now I start crying I tell Abbie I dont want to die She tells me I wont and I believe her We go back to the room instead of going to play When we get back daddy asks us why we are back already Abbie tells him why he looks at mom and says We didnt want you to find out why we are crying The doctor said since their going to stop the chemo and I can go homeWell it has been two days since I have been home I tell mom I am feeling very weak so she said she is going to take me to the doctors They said I only have two and half weeks to live They are planning a surgery to see if they can find a way to get rid of some of my cancer Before the surgery they have to scan my body to know where to go in
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