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Riding in a car can be very difficult when its full of people I had that experience when my family decided to go visit my sister in Virginia It was the second day of spring 2012 the weather was chilly We headed down to Virginia around nine am The roads were foggy and there were still signs of snow It was one of the worst trips of my life because my brother made me sit in back where there is no room to move around All I could do was sit there quietly I thought I could sleep the whole time so I put my headphones on and listened music but it was not as easy as I thought The roads were horrible and damaged the car started to jerk so every time I try to sleep a pothole woke me up My family started their chit chat and gossip while I was all alone in the back of the car listing music I had a feeling that my trip wouldnt be as fun as I thought it On our way to Virginia we went through Ohio where speed limits are annoyingly lower from Michigan I noticed the cops were hiding by the shoulder this is when my brother slowed down speed and drove carefully However the view of Ohio was amazing there were tall majestic horses on the side of the highways As we drove further I noticed there were farms and markets where people selling tomatoes corn and cherries We stopped by one those farms and bought ten dollars worth of cherries Then we went ahead to the horse and cow farms I heard the cows were mooing and there many were adorable calves It was even more fascinating to observe how the cattle were eating and chewing their cud As we left Ohio we reached in the state of Pennsylvania we stopped there at a McDonalds for lunch
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