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She stands a staggering 5 feet 2 inches tall weighs a massive 95 pounds and has short brown hair and brown eyes I see my older sister Leslie Others see a model of perfection Dont get me wrong my sister and I are close and have been inseparable since birth My mother has kept pictures of us ranging from the time we shared a playpen as babies to just recently at Leslies graduation For seventeen years weve shared every life experience imaginable and weve dealt with the trials and tribulations that come with growing up But in September she left home to attend the University of California at Irvine leaving me to face life alone However it gave me the opportunity to live life by myself as Ryan instead of Leslies little brotherSince the beginning I have gone to the same school as Leslie and almost every year I got stuck with a teacher that she had had the previous year Being only eleven months younger than my sibling made the memory of Leslie being the bright student that she is easier for my teachers to recall Every September for eleven years I was greeted by all of my teachers with the same Oh youre Leslies little brother This was really no big deal The following year my fifth grade teacher said to me Oh youre Leslies little brother This normally did not faze me since it happened to me several times before with different people but on this occasion it was the same person This upset me a littleAt first this association with my scholarly sister did not bother me too much If anything I found it beneficial because I believed that it would help me build relationships with my teachers But with each passing year the little comments and remarks literally ate away at my identity Comments like You did good but Leslie got a better grade last year can easily destroy
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