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Kibin. (2024). Rodin's journey to artistic success. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/rodins-journey-to-artistic-success-0kpHIG4f
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"This is a well-informed and informative piece that shows your mastery of Rodin's work and the wider field and subject, including influences and techniques. The note at the end about your personal experience adds interest, and I appreciated it as your reader; I encourage you to revise or reorganize that final paragraph a bit further for flow and to avoid ending on "and just left..." which doesn't feel quite assertive enough to serve as the final moment of a strong essay.
Another area to work a bit more with will be in integrating your quotations. These are well-chosen and do good work as evidence, but are often delivered as standalone sentences; instead, use signal phrases or other transitions to take ownership of that evidence, which in turn will demonstrate your work as the researcher and informed author. At the level of lower-order concerns, a proofread should catch occasional mechanics issues like comma splices. As a final note, give Rodin's full name in your first sentence."
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). Rodin's journey to artistic success. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/rodins-journey-to-artistic-success-0kpHIG4f
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("Rodin's Journey to Artistic Success.")
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"Rodin's Journey to Artistic Success." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/rodins-journey-to-artistic-success-0kpHIG4f
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1. "Rodin's Journey to Artistic Success." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/rodins-journey-to-artistic-success-0kpHIG4f.
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