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On the way to my hometown I spent five hours on the bus and I saw an accident All of the travelers were unlucky because the buss air conditioner was broken and we began our trip at noon in the hot summer A memorable incident story was happened when I was in Taiwan The blazing sun was out of his mind and he used his fire to melt an asphalt road The fire shot into a bus that was like a steamer There was nothing on the roadside-no tree no water The fifty people sited bus was only one car on the road The driver did not tell us the air conditioner was broken After our trip began he told us the air conditioner was broken Every traveler wanted to change this bus but the bus was the last bus There was no other bus for us to change Most of the travelers on the bus were looking for something that could quench their thirst A young man who sat in a back seat was taking out a knife to pare a red apple The apple that was full of sweet liquid attracted a sweet girl The sweet girl with a red dress was six years old Her six inches long braids with a butterfly chignon made her looked like a little princess She turned her head to her mother and used her pitiful eyes to beg her mother but her mother pretended she did not see her daughters eyes and looked out through the bus window A chilly face reflected from the window Everyone saw the cool face would know she was a selfish person She looked like no things could affect she even her daughter The apples sweet scent made the little girl turns her face and looks at the apple with a covetous eye The young man finished the apple and took out another apple and started paring Unable to
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