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I am sitting in the bus on my way to school fighting the headache that pulsed near my eyes to the back of my head I know the bus ride took thirty minutes to arrive to the school so I wondered if I should make a call to Brittany I sat there in silence as time passed by As the bus is pulled up at the University of California I grab the phone to make the call A loud thump distracted me into dialing the number I look to my side to find a young Asian girl picking up her book Going back to my phone I finally decided to dial Beep beep beep was the noise my phone made as I dialed the numbers carefully Brittany answered Hello Oh hey Brittany I am on my way Be ready outside yah I dont want to wait like an idiot ha I giggled as if it was a comment that no one could resist from laughing My giggle came to an erupt stop as I heard four girls in the back laughing Hahaha that was so funny They better not be laughing at me I thought Hello Brittany Just wait for me outside ok I responded Arlen umm I am actually not there yet I am so sorry Umm I came to McDonalds to get food be there in 10 promise I thought to myself How in the world can this woman make me hurry and decide to get off campus to eat OMG Now I only have a few minutes to study with her Only instead of saying that I responded with carelessness attitude Oh ok then well I dont know Just tell me when youre here I guess ill wait outside I hear a click as she hangs up Silence in the bus then follows The bus croaked endlessly making it the only sound left to hear Ring Ring
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