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The following chain of events or slice of life occurred on June 14 2004 between the hours of 100 pm - 200 pm eastern standard time in Sandbridge Virginia Sweating Always sweating I hate when perspiration beads into my eyes I hold my hand up to the sun my lips parched the excess heat rising off the sand in the distance Surveying my surroundings I spot my flat to the left Its pale grey siding with sky blue shudders flapping in the wind this colossus rises 3 stories above the dunes which are littered with a few long strands of crab grass and randomly placed jagged stones from the previous establishment I remember many windows a back porch and a rusty grill To the right of me is the ocean the salty fragrance wafting through the air I can almost feel as if I were immersed in its protective core Snap I suddenly realize that Im in the middle of the beach bordering heat exhaustion I havent drank anything all morning my lips and my eyes pain me I need rejuvenation I need Deer Park The sand that lay between the abode and I was littered with foot impressions that reminded me of the rolling Piedmont hills of Virginia I begin my journey to the house step by scorching step towards the shadow lands The cool shaded sand was beckoning for my feet it was my salvation I just had to get there My slow trudge transformed into an all-out sprint in a matter of seconds my heart racing my veins pumped with battery acid Whoosh I relaxed in the cool shaded comfort zone beneath the porch The stairs to the upper floors lay to the left of me and the foot shower to the right As I wash my extremities my vision meanders towards the flight of stairs that awaits me the year-old stairs still stalwart as they had appeared in the
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