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During my elementary schooling I had multiple challenges that proved overwhelming to me Although I was an average student I lacked the self-confidence and the conviction needed to utilize my potential I had self-esteem issues that served to wreck me terribly Although I had defined personal aspirations I harbored negative thoughts and feelings about myself Many times I had the conviction that I could not improve my grades because I was a below average student The negative feelings had taken a salient toll on and served as a regular inner torment However after joining high school I attended a motivational seminar that transformed my perspective This essay will describe that experienceAs highlighted above developing self-esteem proved highly challenging for me It affected my studies adversely because I scored low grades Moreover I had a constant nagging fear that dissuaded me from making trials in life Although I loved sports I never auditioned for the school team for fear that I may be eliminated Since fear and low self-esteem defined the inner me I exhibited hatred for people who had the courage to face challenges and triumph over them I was unsure of what I felt towards them at times I wished I had the inner conviction that propelled them to success I had the determination to be a subject of admiration for my siblings but I did not have a defined strategy for achieving that My teachers recognized my weakness and made concerted efforts of helping me The problem progressed throughout middle school and served to disorient me badly Although I passed my final exams and secured a place in a prestigious high school my success resulted from pressure exerted on me by the teachers Schiraldi 56 After joining high school I realized that a self-drive for learning was mandatory if I needed to achieve my long-term goals I still harbored the negative feelings I had in the previous years However I
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