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The September air was cool and crisp ass all the schools and colleges were just opening Jeff Koback a college sophmore was anxious to bein college After his lengthy three month summer break The only thing he couldnt stand was the workload because he was lucky because last your he almost didnt pass This year the only thing he wants is a computer because it would make life so much easier Jeff began his first weekend since returning to college by waking up early around nine oclock in the morning took a shower brushed his teeth got dressed and drove to the bank At the bank he walked to the teller and asked Can I cash this The teller responded Yes you can may I see your idenification she read his drivers liscense andJeff cashed his paycheck Jeff walked out of the bank as he tucked his money into his wallet he jumped into his car and drove home Twenty minutes later he parked his car and walked into the door Hey Jeff Jeffs dad said as Jeff closed the door Want some breakfast Sure Jeff said Jeff went to the oven and took his pancakes and bacon and sat down with his dad to read the paper They read the paper for twenty minutes as Jeffs dad asked Hey Jeff read this ad he passed the ad to him and Jeff read through it as his dad explained Brand new computer really powerful and what you would like really cheap he explained How much Jeff asked Jeffs dad pointed to the bottom of the ad where it said 250 one day only saturday Jeff asked Dad can I borrow some money I only got like 150 from my paycheck Jeffs dad replied I cant I just paid my insurance bill I would if I could He thought to himself and then said I think you should ask your mom and see what
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