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The bus system at Western Illinois University seems to be a great idea Having stops all over campus to take students to and from class and then even back to the dorms a friends Wal-Mart and parties When I found out about the Go West bus system is was so excited especially since I do not have my car down here and I am not one who loves to walk What more could I ask for There is a bus that picks me up and drops me pretty much anywhere on campus I would like to go Even though the bus system is set up for our convenience it is most of the time more aggravating then it is worth The first time I took the bus was a time at Western Illinois University that I will never forget It was right at the beginning of winter and I had decided that it was too cold to walk to my classes I then thought that this would be a great opportunity for me to check out the bus system Boy what a mistake that was As soon as there was sight of the bus people were plowing me over and running out to the bus As I finally made it to the bus I managed to squeeze myself on The first thing that I remember was the rude bus driver telling us to move back and get behind the line As we began to take off we were shoved in the bus like a can of sardines Shoulder to shoulder and arm to arm talk about an invasion of your personal space Then I started to get really hot it felt as if it was 90degress on that bus Then of course one girl who had a whole bottle of purfume on surrounded me and it was giving me a headache along with a boy who looked and smelled like he had n ot
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