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It is an outrage that crime has become so hanous today Innocent victims are simply by standard hurt for no reason I was a witness to a senseless act of violence a drive by Since then I question our government and our society What makes a person want to kill another for absolutely no reason I remember the event as clearly as the day it happened As my friends and I drove from club Area 51 to find a hotel on Sugarcreek road I experienced one of the most frightening events of my life I will never forget the loud pops of the nine-millimeter handgun being fired at the car in the lane next to us the sight of the wounded man and the helpless feeling of being a witness to the crime and not being able to bring the shooter to justice I will never be able to forget the loud pops that the gun made My friends and I were having a wonderful time at the club that Friday night but when we left the club to find a hotel room everything changed A beautiful 1955 canary yellow Ford was being admired by many as it drove up and down the strip It was a beautiful car as well as very loud The deep rumble of the cars exhaust brought a lot of attention to the car Event my friends and I sped up to get beside of it It was at a moment of adoration of the car that I heard a distinct pop pop pop pop pop Then silence I the noticed a gray Toyota Tercel speeding away Although unaware what exactly the sound was I had a gut feeling that it was gunshots Barbara asked if it was backfire from the vintage Ford and I stated that I thought that it was gunfire gunfire on a busy street It scared me From the distinct pops I knew what the sound
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