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Write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made an impacton your life and explain how and why this person is important to youWe sat three to a seat about 36 people in one bus in the middle ofthis scorching Houston heat It was a Friday we itch to get home andtake a load off To amplify our situation we had a substitute busdriver that day Like missals paper balls flew over my head once inwhile coming in contact with my face I wasnt one to be left out of thefun so I join in and launch a few myself The older kids who were toomature to throw paper balls thought it would be amusing to pick funof the bus driver Someone would yell out a profane word and hidebetween the seats peeking out to see if they got her attention Thiswent on for a while until we were stuck in traffic for about fifteenminutes and the heat ceased our chaos in bus 679 Long faces bodyslouching sweat creeping through our pours we sat on the buscomplaining about how suffocating it was I realize that we were rightoutside of the neighborhood so I came up with the bright idea to jumpout the back door of the bus The select few that sat close enougharound me thought it was a great idea also and were enthusiastic aboutdoing it Contemplating on who would be the first to actual jump Ibravely stood up pull the lever and hoped out running on the side ofthe road toward my neighborhood Heart racing but a feeling of freedomcame over me I turn back and saw about twelve people running after meThe thrill was temporary as I approach my house it don on me that therecould have been a camera on the bus that caught what we did Thinkingabout how much worst the consequences would have been if the school wasto be the one to alert my mom
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