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I have been blessed in my life to have many great influences on me and my character I think the person who has had the greatest and most significant influence on me would be my dad He is the best man I know and has such a great heart He will do anything for anyone without even being asked to He loves everyone and is such a great dad He puts God first in everything he does and tries harder to be more like Him everyday My dad is an overall happy person who can get though any situation He is like superman in my eyes and I do not know what I would do without him He has helped me through every situation in my life Whenever I have gone through something hard in my life such as my grandmother passing away my dad has been there to hold my hand through it all My dad is a hard worker and provides for my family He works for a company in downtown Atlanta and is very successful at what he does He is also an elder at my church This shows that he is a great leader and many people respect him He has taught me to never give up and to always pursue my dreams and try my best He is hilarious and always makes me laugh and can always make me smile when I am upset He is also very selfless He never thinks about himself and he always puts others in front of himself My dad is a very smart man and he always gives me good advice One thing he gave me advice on was in 9th grade about going on a mission trip None of my friends were going but he thought it would be a good idea for me to go to Mexico and try it out so I did This was one of the best
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