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My sister has always been an influential part of my life Even though she is older than me I know I can always depend on her for support and encouragement I feel as if I can go to her for anything and she is always happy to help She is kind hearted beautiful and the best friend I could ever ask for Although our parents were together my sister and I did not have the most pleasant childhood Our mother and father fought all the time I did not really understand what was happening however my sister did and she tried her best to shield me from the fighting She tried to keep me busy by suggesting that I spend time in our playroom or spend time outside She was always there for me and protected me like a big sister shouldAs we got older I started going to my sister for advice on all the usual teenage topics boys clothes and make-up I wanted to be just like her but my envy seemed to only irritate my sister when we were younger I was the annoying little brat who would not leave her big sister alone Luckily she did not let her feelings of annoyance prevent her from being a support structure for me She gave me much needed guidance often helped me with my homework and inspired me to become the person I am today Even though we are older and I am no longer a child I still go to my sister for reassurance and incite She has been out of college for two years but she is still very much the same big sister that I remember from our childhood She is still willing to help me with my homework she still protects me from my parents and she is trying to teach me financial responsibility Although my sister may be unaware she has had a significant impact on my
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