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I just turned ten years old and my family and I are going on vacation We are going to Cancun I have never been there so I cant wait to see what it looks like We are getting into the car which will take us to the airport and I am very excited We just arrived at the airport and soon going to go on the plane My family and I are waiting on the ticket line until they check our passports and take our tickets We just got on the plane it takes about three hours to get to Cancun We should be there soon We are now arriving in Cancun I am going to go to my room and unpack and then I will go in the pool I am now swimming in the pool and I see some kids playing catch The ball just came in my direction and I am going to throw it back to them They are asking me if I want to play catch with them and I say yes We went to play catch together Im going to go over and say bye to my friends because we have to go back to our families Today is the next day and we are meeting up We are going to walk around the resort We are going to find out what they have on this resort We found out that they have a jungle tour We see a sign that says you cant go on the tour unless you are over 18 and you are with an adult So we go to our parents and ask them to take us on the tour My dad and I got on the boat which is the hardest part My dad is going to drive The boat is going very fast and I am having an adrenaline rush which I love I see a lot of birds such as parrots
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