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How do I know Im free Well in the country today we dont have near as many freedoms as we would like Most of the freedoms that were originally written in the Declaration of Independence have been distorted from their original purpose Take freedom of speech for one These days you cant just go around and say what you want when you want Yes a lot of our freedoms come with responsibilities but there is no excuse for prosecuting a person for exercising their rights But there are times when I do feel completely free from all the rules of society One would be when Im up on the slopes snowboarding There Im not worrying about weather or not Im going to pass the test tomorrow or if Im going to break my little toe if I hit a tree When Im up there I go to my happy place in a way Im no longer aware of anything that is going on outside of that ski area and I dont really care either The only thing Im thinking about when I go up is the song that I get stuck in my head before I leave Before I go up to the ski area I like to crank up some speed metal and get a really fast and heavy song stuck in my head it really helps me get the adrenaline rush going Another time when Ive felt the most free was this last summer on the days of July 8-10 when Kail Nick Derick and I went to a Metallica concert in Denver It wasnt just when we were at the concert itself although that was the time when Ive never felt so free and alive but the whole trip was like getting away from all the laws which control my life every day Even though those rules were still in effect they just didnt matter because we were all in our own
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