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When the state deems a person unfit to be a parent whether it bebecause of past misdeeds or the likely perpetuation of such a lifestyleit maintains the ability to remove said parents claims to parenthoodSadly this was exactly the situation of a relative of mine in 2008Happily their loss turned into my immediate familys gain In thisadoption at least both the adoptees and the adopters benefited greatlydespite the obstacles they initially encountered Jacob is the older of the two biological brothers born July 8th 2008and he was the only one of the two to truly experience state custodyTaken from his mother my third cousin at birth Jacob was subsequentlyplaced into the foster care system He lived in a home with severalother children all fostered and under the age of six and it followedthat neither he nor the other children received the attention due topeople their age He was left sitting in dirty diapers and ill-fittingclosed malnourished and neglected by his current foster parents Assoon as my parents caught wind of the little mans plight a franticrace began to rescue him from it Reams of paperwork had to be filedwith the State in order to license my parents fostering endeavor andeven their age became an issue Phone calls were placed homeinspections were done references were checked interviews wereconducted and finally my parents obtained a license to house childrentemporarily who were not their own Being Jacobs relatives our familyhad priority over his current foster parents On January 29th 2009Jacob was welcomed into our home For being over six months old Jacobwas behind children his age in terms of motor and verbal skills as wellas in height and weight measurements All of that changed once he movedin and made our family of four a family of five Jake was not the only one to benefit from this relationship thoughCertainly the symbiotic nature of his addition was immediately visibleMy parents advantage was the first to reveal
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