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I had been looking forward to this weekend for months It was my sisters sixteenth birthday and my whole family was going up to stay at my grandparents house in Wintergreen Virginia December was the perfect time to go there was fresh snow on the ski slopes the small town was setting up for Christmas and everybody was excited for the holidays My grandparents house was my favorite place to go and visit as a kid The house was set perfectly on the mountain so we were able to wake up in the morning strap on our skis and ski down the mountain And there was no better feeling than sitting by the fireplace drinking hot chocolate and watching the sun set through the skylights at the end of the day I knew that this trip was going to be as great as it always is The morning after we arrived instead of going skiing we decided to go snow tubing which I had never done before We all put on our snow gear pilled in the car and drove to the snow tubing hills I was so nervous to go down the first time that my family had to hold me down and push me down the hill Immediately when I got to the bottom I was furious with my family but so anxious to get back to the top and slide down again I was definitely not going to tell my family this and give them that satisfaction As the day went on it was getting more and more crowded The sun had come out and melted some of the snow but it later refroze and became very icy My family was getting tired so we all decided to go down the hill one more time and then call it a day This time I decided to be adventurous and connect my tube with my moms As we were going down
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