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To be given the chance to play baseball was one of the greatest times of my life I played baseball for four years and every year I made the all-star team My best friend and I played on every regular season team and every all-star team together The final game of our career was unforgettable It had been 4 years of great enjoyment with my best friend Cody Smith We always clowned around in practice but when the game would start we had a high intensity Cody would pitch and I would play second base When he wasnt pitching I would and he would play third base We were the top players in our baseball league or so we thought Our all-star team had made it to the championship of our state tournament Before our team took the field our coach Mr Zamouski gave us a talk He said Well men weve came a long way Todays the day weve all practiced so hard for but I want to have fun with it Lets treat this like every other game we have won Youre all winners win or lose I want you all to know that I feel privileged to have coached such a fine bunch of men So lets go out and play this game as hard as you can What do you say lets go have FUN We all got up and yelled YEAH Lets play hard Yeah As we all got more pumped up Who are we NI As we got louder and more intense Coach said Bring it in Win on three One two three as we all yelled together WIN As I ran on to that field I recalled all the practicing I had done and I knew I owed most of it to my father He started me throwing and hitting when I was about four-years-old As my passion grew more and more I wanted to go practice
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