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Surrounded by white walls a bed and a locked door this is another birthday just like the rest Today is my 64th birthday and the only contact with the world I had today was with the nurse that gave me my breakfast and medicine Ive called the Tinley Mental hospital home for the last seven years They let me out and then I forget to take my medicine and Im right back where I started Although Im not married I have three children Tree Seven Galmore Theodora Bass Galmore and Ally-Victoria Galmore in which all three warned me that if I dont take my medicine I was going to end up here And I did Although schizophrenia runs in my family I didnt except that I would be diagnosed with it In addition to this I have to try to fight breast cancer All those years of smoking and drinking contributed to this problem If I could I would have stopped those nasty habits a long time ago I was physical healthy I eat all the right food exercised frequently and did household chores Yet I was so normal I was very different at the same time I still associate with that people I graduated high school with I went on to go to college for studying to become a plastic surgeon but was later stopped by my illness My schizophrenia illness allows me to hear voices and to see people when no one is talking or in the room with me Ive had jobs where my illness was too much and I had to quiet I did modeling in my late 30s and my illness became so bad that I would hear voices when no one was speaking I would looked around and move quite frequently to the point where the photographer gotten so frustrated that he fired me on the spot Since I was little Ive been doing modeling Im really good at
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