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Personal essay - English As I look over my life there are three areas that have influenced me the most My formative years with my mother gave me a positive view of my world Teachers during my high school and college years challanged me to think not only about my personal concerns but also about giving back to the community at large Last of all serving a mission for my church changed my view of the hispanic culture and my second language Spanish I remember fondly my formative years with my mother She introduced me to my first language English She presented all the words which explained the world around me Her lessons about relationships in the family at school and in the community remain with me still It is said that a teacher touches a life forever My sixth grade teacher did in fact touch mine She gave me an aptitude test for languages in general Spanish was to be my subject of interest This interest has lasted a whole life long Other teachers encouraged me to go college and yes I graduated with a degree in Spanish from BYU Leaders at my church recognized my interest not only in Spanish but also in teaching Consquently an application and calling was extended to me by the First Presidency I served in the West Spanish American Mission which was located in East Los Angeles Most everything I needed to learn about serving others I learned on my mission I learned it in Spanish for two years Finally my life was and is influnced by my mother my teachers and my church However at the end of the day it has been most influenced by the Spanish language and the culture which I have grown to love
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