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I guess I must have been about seven or eight I couldnt have been much younger It was the first time my Dad took me to a real baseball game I guess I must have seen too many innings because I suddenly had to get up and take a walk I wasnt sure my Dad would let me go by myself but we were within one run of tying the game and he didnt want to miss anything I was thrilled When youre seven or eight walking around the stadium by yourself is a very big adventure I was a little hurt that he wasnt more worried about me I mean who knows what kind of weirdos might have been walking around the stadium Anyway there werent any weirdos But when I got back to my seat this GUY was in it This total stranger was in my seat and he was talking to my Dad They were laughing and my Dad had his arm around his shoulder just like he used to put his arm around my shoulder The mens room was up a level from our seats so I saw them before they saw me And all I could think was why is he talking to that guy Thats my seat Thats MY DAD I couldnt move I just stood there in the middle of the stadium frozen I thought Id been replaced I wanted to scream No Dad Ill be a better son Whatever it takes Ill do it Dad But I couldnt I just stood there I guess I was crying This guy in a blue shirt I guess who was a security guard or something came up and tried to find out what was wrong but I couldnt tell him How could I tell him my DAD dumped me So he kind of opened my fingers where I was holding my ticket and saw where my seat
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