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Overwhelmed with happiness I put my hands to my face and begin to weep hysterically Through two blurry eyes I glance around to descry an unfamiliar place yet I have dreamed all my life to be here Never have I imagined such raving beauty and effulgence I walked the ground ofScrumptious sun-ripened fruitage abundantly covered the stems of all the trees as well as the green earth below Longing for a nibble of the apple lying at my feet I licked my lips stooped down and swiped it up There were no men or snakes around to get me into trouble so I devoured that apple Vegetation of all sorts grew by the bushels through out the terra firma as far Far more brilliant than what I was once used to the sun shone through the clouds and lit the entire earth The thrill of never distressing over lathering my skin in greasy malodorous sun tan oil again forced a smile upon my face the ozone layer was rejuvenated Gently the summerzephyr carried a somewhat familiar aroma the country air I was used to maybe Pleased with the familiar aroma I inhaled as much of it as possibleWild life of all kingdoms grazed in the open fields surrounding me Fierce lions and tigers strutted back and forth with pride not posing a threat to me or the other animals FlabbergastedI paused to admire the bizarre interaction between them Hiding from ferocious beasts that ruled the forests was indeed unnecessary now Harmoniously young animals of opposite families played together as their parents collected food for their survival Birds chirped sweet melodious tunes like a church quire on a cheerful Sunday afternoonCalmly the spring water gurgling nearby relaxed all the tension from my back and brought peaceful memories into mind I though back to the sizzling summer days when my friends and I would strip down to our birthday suits and make a run for the water
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