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It always happens at the kindergarten The teachers ask little students who their role model is Most of them say police officer fire fighter or their parents like heroic people When I was in kindergarten I never answered for that question Truth I had nothing on my mind to answer Who is my role model I questioned myself again again and I had waited for my real role model It was cold December when I met her My mom was told that I seemed to have special talent on singing so she brought me to someone who teaches singers professionally I just turned 12 had no idea on singing I just liked to sing The woman who my mom brought me to looked very sharp I could so tell that she was not and never could be easy person She looked at me once and said She is way too young to start singing My moms face turned surprised And she also said well but lets see how you can sing shall we and grabbed my hand She introduced herself as Mrs Chun We started worming up and I sang Caro mio ben After I sang the piece there was exactly 5 minutes of silence Mrs Chun was gaping on me and my mom was trying to figure out what was going on Its incredible finally Mrs Chun closed her mouth and talked She told my mom that she never except young singers but shell on this time I started having private lessons with her who I never thought could be my forever role model Soon as I started studying with her I got to know her better She helped me to think seriously in musicianship and in one word she was my musical guardian angel As I got to know her better I asked to myself hits question She is really role model type Should I consider her as my role model I wasnt
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