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I think an event that proves I deserve the word lost would be from this summer when I was on vacation It would be my loss of innocence It all happened right after my dad his friend and I finished playing a round of golf It was the very first time I had ever beat my dad We were on our way back to our friends house in Reno but we stopped to get some gas and to call his wife and ask if we should pick up some grub We couldnt get ahold of them so we started backWe pulled out of the gas station where we had parked and started to cross the highway to start on our way back We were almost to our turnoff when an on coming car T-boned us I can still remember its squealing brakes The Impact as it hit us I felt as though I had been hit by a huge wave The next thing recall I was lying in the street covered in a shiny red liquid Actually it was just glass and blood I was surrounded by people My dad was holding a shirt to my head Blood was spewing from all over my body Everyone around me was telling me to be calm The highway patrol was there they called the hospital An ambulance showed up about five minutes later The men from the ambulance got out and tended to me immediately They rolled me onto a backboard and carried me into the ambulance Then they stabbed a IV into me We headed south to Carson City Although I thought they would work on me there they didnt I stayed there shortly They pushed me around the backboard all the way to the top floor From there they loaded me onto the care flight helicopter On my way to my final destination Reno I thenparted with my new ambulance friends The flight
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