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Life is a burden that you cant get rid of unless you got money overflowing in your banks or if youre dead This is what i was thinking to myself on December 20th 2006 This is the day that I officially lost who I Feagiai Crystal Lelea once was This day made my family and I travel onto seperate paths This is the same day my dad was taken to jail for something he was wrongfully acused for by his own dad This wasnt the beginning of my problems thats just where the timid little twelve year old Crystal was left behindMy dad is a family man for sure Since his hip is messed up our mom has always been the one to work My mom is the bread winner and since she was never good with money and budgeting my dad is the one who handels the bills and made sure we had what we needed But when my dad was taken we realized that he is the necessity to our lives My dad going to jail left our house chaotic My mom needed her other half to do the things she couldnt do Like budgeting our money and being a father to all three of my brothers She did nothing but work and sleep so it seemed When wed leave for school she would be sleeping when wed come home she would already be at work I felt like I had no parents and I know my brothers- and sisters- felt this way too My older brother Vaa started running down a path of drugs and had so many questions about how could he be a man for our family if our dad isnt there to show him My older sister Soo was depressed more than ever She turned to cutting to deal with our problems My little brother AJ changed from a kid who was known as the class clown to
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