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My Experience That Changed Me I went to camp for the first time last summer to get away from the pressures of home and school Camp was a month long I have never been away from my parents more than a week I was very anxious I had no idea what situations to expect and how I would handle them I started to really wonder about my life The way it was going was not the best for me I can run away from my reality but I know that I was going to have to come back to it in a month The way I treat people was total opposite from how I treated my parents What my friends were capable of doing was not a bit close to what my parents would let me do my parents are very narrow minded My grandparents were even more severe my culture is different from my friends and its hard for me to understand and accept it What my parents expect from me is much higher then what other parents require from kids my age I have more responsibilities at home and of course I have school responsibilities to go along with it as well Since my parents didnt let me do the things I insisted to do I became quite rebellious I would answer back to them not pay attention and not do the things they wanted me to I needed a new ways of handling things at home I thought nobody or anything can help me I couldnt wait to leave After one week camp was not great anymore all of my bunk mates felt the same way Everything little thing anyone would do got to be so aggravating We really started having problems from the first day of camp A girl in my bunk named Jenna did not get to be in the bunk she wanted
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