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Writing starter I was looking forward to the moment I was looking forward to the moment when I got my Commandos Green Beret Promotion in the US army It was a beautiful day I was just patrolling the base camp I could smell the burning rubber hear the birds tweet and the whoosh of the stream down below It was then when I got a call on my crusty old radio which looked like a little wooden box with some knobs in it waiting to fall apart I was on mission with Beasley He was the chief commander of the US army sniper Division It was a mission to go to Colombia and wipe out the General of sate and my job was to protect him and watch his back giving any technical assistance The next morning was our only proper meal It was scrumptious meat with egg omelets mouth watering Scallops wrapped in Bacon grilled served with teriyaki vegetables topped with sun dried tomato and to top it all off Raspberry Mousse covered with raspberries cream caramelized nuts That was it we too a break for an hour had a little nap packed our thing loaded our ammo We were on our way the chopper dropped us off at our rendezvous the copper couldnt completely touch down because of the rocks so we had to jump of it from about one and half meters high Splash I fell in small puddle my new uniform wet already The sky was black We could feel the rain on its way and before you know it tap tap tap on my helmet then the sound got faster in less than twenty seconds It was pissing Beasley was in charge of the mission so he was leading It was a thick dark jungle everywhere looked the same left right and center Without a map and a compass we wouldnt have gone
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