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My lovely dogWhen I was a small child I love to play with small puppies then days started to pass I also wanted a small cute puppy I requested my mom to provied me a puppy when my birthday came my mom provied me a puppy as a gift I became very happy my puppy was very cute furry and white like a snow and soft and smooth like a cotton thats why with lots of love we named him jenny I caught him in my hand and started to dance Time started to pass and we both grew together by playing and doing lots of fun By sitting with us my dog learned all those activities which we used to do Not only he used to learn but also he used to try to do all thoes things He was very sweet He had some good as well as bad aspectsHis bad aspects was not much but yes when we used to scold him he quickly becomes angry and donot used to eat anything When we scold him his heart used to pain and sometimes he used to cry alsohe used to love my mom and dad a lot and my mom and dad also loved him a lot He used to be greedy with us when we sit near our mom and dad and he alone wanted to sit near our mom and dad He thinked our mom and dad as his own mom and dad So sometimes I used to be very angry with himHe had a lots of good aspects He used to guard our house very nicely Early in the morning when my mom used to pray the god and ring the bell my dog used to come runnning and donot used to eat prasad until and
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