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A Pro-Life Perspective of the Controversial Topic of Abortion

This essay argues that abortion is immoral as it is ultimately murder. The student laments the use of abortion as a form of contraception and suggests other methods to avoid pregnancy in the first place.
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Bob's feedback:

"You raise some valid objections to legalized abortion in this essay. In particular, you make a very logical case that birth control at the time of sexual activity is more sensible all around than seeking an abortion after the fact.

Make sure that you are using sources that back up your claims. You present several statistics that do not have support, and when you do cite a source, it does not actually support your argument. The article that you cite by Carl Sagan and Ann Druyan ultimately advocates for legalized abortion, but you use it to support your argument against it.

You raise the issue that lawmakers focus on abortions by young people even though they make up a fraction of all abortions. However, you then go on to focus almost exclusively on the same demographic. If you feel that there should be more focus on adults in this situation, it would be prudent to focus on them in your own essay.

Your essay tends to have a conversational tone, which is not always fitting in an argumentative academic essay. Consider revising it to include more formal language. This will help your credibility."

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