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I remember it like it was yesterday It was night time and the sky was dark except for the stars My family and I were in the house and my dad was experiencing a lot of pain on one side of his stomach My mom tried to get him to go to the hospital but he wouldnt Over the hours the pain became worse Finally the pain got so bad that he had to go to the hospital My brother and I had to stay with my grandmother while my mom was at the hospital with my dad It took all day at the hospital to find out what was wrong After a number of tests the doctors determined that the pain he was experiencing was due to cancer He had cancer in his left kidney We were all very concerned about this and so he went into surgery almost immediately While he was in surgery I thought a lot about how I never thought one of my parents would ever have to go through something like this When you like your life day to day normally you never stop to think what if this were to happen And this surgery really made me stop and think Being young I thought about stuff like What if something were to go wrong and I didnt have a dad anymore What would it be like living just me my brother and my mom Would people look at me different Would I look at myself differently These are only some of the things that went through my mind at the time I can remember being at my grandmas as long he was in the hospital and my mom
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