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Bright lights flash simultaneously across the big screen message board The crowd goes wild and roars with excitement as the pit crew rush in towards the car to congratulate the winning driver I remember sitting in front of the television set and watching the driver step out of the car and be boosted up on top of shoulders after shoulders At that point I started wishing that I were the driver and that it was me being congratulated and praised by everyone around After that day I developed an interest in racing and being fifteen and on the verge of getting my license made me want to race even more I wanted to re-live that scene in reality I obtained my drivers license on my sixteenth birthday and on that very day I also received a sports car as a present As with all teenage boys I had an urge to show off my car by speeding Every day after school I would peer pressure some of my friends to race me to my house in our cars and every day I would beat them After a while it started to get boring and the adrenaline rush was starting to fade but I still had a burning passion for speed and challenge The next day I signed up for a class in motorcycle driving lessons and within two weeks I had my M1 license Once again I was able to peer pressure some of my friends to get their motorcycle licenses too By now my intentions of racing on our motorcycles was clear to them I never once tune to think that racing on a motorcycle was far more dangerous and the chances of getting hurt or even dying were greater than racing in a car I had to learn that lesson the hard way My best friend and I were going to go meet some of our friends at a Chinese restaurant
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