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Beyoncs voice thumped through the loud speakers An enormous and rather garish stopwatch beamed from afar flashing the time elapsed 4815 I would soon learn that of all eighty five participants I was dead last Not second to last or almost last but completely and unequivocally last For most people coming in last in nearly anything would qualify as an automatic failure I on the contrary had quite possibly never been so elated to receive last place in my entire life I had done what had seemed impossible only a short time earlier finish a 5k race As I crossed the finish line tears and perspiration which for the record are not an attractive mix streamed down my face I had accomplished what may have seemed like a menial accomplishment to most but to me was quite possibly one of the most daunting tasks of my life not allowing myself to quit after multiple opportunities to do just thatIf I were to sum up the first fifteen years of my life in one word sedentary would probably be an overwhelmingly accurate adjective To paraphrase a very long story it turns out that despite my insistence of the opposite a diet of Ben Jerrys and Pringles isnt very forgiving In all seriousness I had let myself become so extremely unhealthy in my habits that I had eaten myself into obesity At a doctors appointment for my annual check-up my doctor would soon utter a phrase that will forever be ingrained in my mind She looked at me wide-eyed and said pointedly You have become obese you need to change now For the rest of that day I remember walking around in a daze as I pondered her words Up until that point in my life I had never held myself accountable for my actions I had simply made excuses for my habits my entire life I found that the worse my habits became the sorrier
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