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I havent always been who I am now That seems a bit trivial as no one ever is but by this I mean that I am a completely different creature Let me tell you about it I was not generally speaking and those who knew me then will think I should have left out this qualifier a well-tempered child I was always on the lookout to get the best I could for myself and stick anybody who stuck me I knew what I wanted to do in everything namely to impress as many people as possible Then when I was about eight years old I did something different I had been in church from the time I could be carried and had missed church services only for fire famine or sickness that kept me from moving My parents were Christians and I learned about God from early on I knew for a few years that I wasnt living as I should and it bothered me I knew what I had to do to be saved One morning in church I decided it was time During the sermon I quietly zoned out of the preaching and prayed to God I asked Him as I had been taught to forgive me for my bad life and to come and live with me That same morning I shared the decision with the church and with my family I was baptized the following week Youd think Id learn even at that age Well as boys do I sort of drifted away I went for several years putting God in His corner of my life and generally going back to my old ways Still tempermental still after my own ends I was bothered by this for I guess about six years Finally I got the idea that I needed to make things right While Id thought about it for years I finally was decisive enough to do it at a
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