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This is story all about how my life got flipped turned upside down I like to take a minute just sit right there Ill tell you how I became in love with the girl around the wayIn the summer of 1995 I met this beautiful Mexican girl that just moved on my block I was only in 5th grade and she was in 6th and 1year older than I was I met her threw my friends that I played with everyday on my block When I walked outside one day I saw this unfamiliar girl coloring with my friends on the sidewalk I asked my best friend Brian who she was and he told me she was the new girl on the block When Brian and I walked over to go talk to our friends I sat down right next to the new girl and asked her what her name was She said Bianca but In a really shy voice Through out the whole summer I talked to her and got to really know her Then when the school year started I remember always getting home and trying to get all my homework done just so I could go outside and talk with her Then about 4 months after meeting unfamiliar face I told my friends that I liked Bianca and I wanted to go out with her But all my friend told me was to go and ask her out myself So about a month later I finally got the guts to ask her while I was walking her home from our friends house I remember I was so scared while I was asking her and she could tell I was because I was pretty much stuttering while talking to her Then finally she spoke out saying are you trying to ask me out Then I said yes She said she doesnt know because her mom doesnt want her to have a boyfriend and
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