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It was the month of June 1996 My dad was very sick in the hospital so my mother sent my younger brother and I to my cousins house for the week It was a Saturday and I was more than ready to go home for the weekend I missed my parents and I was anxious to see how my father was doing My cousins drove us home later that afternoon My mom had just brought my dad home from the hospital but she had to leave right away to go to work My dad seemed to be doing great He was in a very lively mood and was really happy to see us There was a nurse staying with my dad to help him out with anything he needed It was hard for him to walk because he was so weak It hurt to see my father like this I could remember a time not too long ago when we all used to go camping or fishing together My dad could do everything a healthy person could doThe nurse was very friendly She talked to us about how my father was doing and she was very interested in the way we felt about things She had a very warm heartLater that evening when my mom came home from work she didnt seem very happy My father had been in and out of the hospital for a year Usually when he came home it was a very happy time for us This time was different My mom sat down with my brother and I and told us that the doctors couldnt do anything else for him He only had 6 months to live I didnt want to believe what she was saying It just didnt seem real to me I could feel myself begin to cry but I tried to hold it back I didnt want mom to see me cry She was already going through
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