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Specific Purpose To persuade my audience to avoid dangerous drivers and steer away from being oneI In August 1995 a 20-year old man enraged after a fender bender with a 33-year old woman pulled her out of her car and forced her to jump from a bridge into the Detroit River where she drownedII Ugly incidents sparked by driver rage are becoming common on American roads Usually highway spats blow over swiftly and drivers head on their way angered but alive All too often however anger escalates into battle and a tragic end Statistics etc Readers Digest 1997III I have a terrible dangerous habit One that could kill me and anyone near me I cannot stand people who drive over the speed limit I make sure they know it too After reading these articles I will never act this irresponsibly or immature again and I hope that I can convince you to do the sameIV Dangerous drivers are enraged intent on getting even and they are the latest threat on the highway that need to be stoppedTransition Dangerous drivers are putting us in dangerI A dangerous driver can be anyone who has personal frustrations anger or prideA A dangerous driver can be a serious problem1 USNews and World Report dated Nov 11 1996 says that according to Ricardo Martinez head of the National Highway Trafic Safety Administration agressive drivers are more of a concern than drunk drivers 40 percent to 30 percent They can climb into the anonymity of an automobile and take their frustrations out on anybody at any time2 They run stop signs and red lights They speed tailgate weave in and out of traffic pass on the right make improper and unsafe lane changes make hand and face gestures scream honk and flash their lightsB The real problem with dangerous drivers is that you simply cant know how far one of them is willing to go to prove a point take revenge
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