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Persuasive essay June 2 2004 Kidney Transplantation How do you feel when you have waiting for something you really need What if it was something you could not live without As member of the advisory board for the hospital I had to make an emergency decision about choosing one of the three people on the waiting list for kidney transplant Since there is only one kidney the decision is difficult After I reviewing every candidate I decided to select Thomas Waller Although Mr Waller is 65 years old he is a generous person He has been donating his time and money to improve the community Mr Waller also promised that if he received the kidney he and his wife will financially fund and support the community hospital I believe with Mr Wallers financial support the community hospital would use his support for scientific researches and experiments Scientific researches could help many patients suffer from kidney failure For example today cloning gives new hope to many patients because embryonic stem cell research has led many scientists that they can use the cells to create new kidney However these processes need financial support to accomplish the creation of human organ According to stem cell research if you needed a kidney doctors could take a hair and used the stem cells to produce a kidney Using Mr Wallers financial support not only we could save his life right now but we could save the life of many other patients in the future The community hospital could use Mr Wallers financial support to buy haemodialysis equipments Haemodialysis equipments are used as artificial kidney for thousands of people who suffer from acute renal failure These equipments help kidney failure patients to per long their lives until they receive perfect-match kidney On the other hand when I think about Karen Swoat one of the candidates to receive kidney transplants I feel very sad about her and her children Mss Swoat is
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