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Were gathered here today at the plaza hotel having had a fabulous dinner and the few odd drinks as well to celebrate a man our father who has now experienced sixty years in this hemisphere He has many hobbies and interest likes swimming hiking and classical music Now he likes golf more than I do The first time I had to convince him to play golf with me Now his golf club is worn out more than mine When I was young I couldnt understand my father because he always went to many countries for his job I didnt know how much he sacrifices himself for his family When I was 16 years old he decided to immigrate to the states for his family again I still remember when the first day came here I saw 3 feet snow just outside of JFK airport He told me this country will show us its difficult and painful moments like this snow storm But only hard wok lots of discipline and positive thinking will give you worm and shiny weather in your future I think he was right Ever since weve come here he has worked hard on his job and business Finally he became a successful and respected businessman He is not just a father to me he also is my personal and business advisor When I had difficult times with my business he didnt give me an answer right away He always made me think before he gave directions to solve a lot of problems One day he told me do your business with honesty I replied dad you know its not easy and how can I make money with honesty Its not possible he told me I know its hard to do it like that but it will makes you very successful businessman someday Believe me I dont think he has an easy life like other
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