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My life is at its peak but now coming to an end My name is Blackberry and in order to live I have to search for this herb It is only located in a magical place with magical characters such as talking animals In order to go into this magical place I have to believe in magic a thing I havent believed in since I was a kid I need the herb because I have cancer and want to be curedI tried everything to make myself believe in magic but nothing helped until that night when a short chubby man with big blue eyes appeared in my room He reminded me of a Leprechaun I did not believe at first that he was there so I rubbed my eyes to see if he would still be there which he was He asked me what I needed help with and I told him that I needed to enter the world of magic He told me that I was in luck because he was the god of the magic worldWith a flash of light I was entered into a place of whiteness-nothing but white except for a mirror how odd So I walked to that mirror and saw a place filled with color and happiness I looked a little closer being curious as I am I felt a force pulling me in I didnt know what happened or how long I was lying on the ground I lifted myself up slowly to see where I was I was in that place I saw in the mirror Now feeling lonely and scared I shouted in fear I dont know why but inside of me I hoped someone would be there Then all of a sudden I heard a voice but did not know where it was coming from so I looked around and finally looking down I saw a little mouse at the first sight of it I
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