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A Religious Struggle in Bless Me Ultima by Richard Anaya

This essay discusses the novel Bless Me Ultima by Richard A. Anaya. The student discusses how the main character, Antonio, struggles with his Christian faith throughout the story.
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Bob's feedback:

"You do a good job of describing Antonio's inner struggle and illustrating how much he questions his faith.

There are many awkward sentences throughout the essay, such as the sentence in the first paragraph that begins "Due to..." and problematic phrasing such as "during the novel." Be sure to have your essay proofread thoroughly.

Your paper relies heavily on quotations from the book, especially in the second half. While having examples to support your ideas is important, saturating your work with quotations can confuse the reader and leaves little room for your own analysis. Pick and choose quotes that strongly support your own ideas.

You dive into the idea that Antonio questions his faith, but there is little discussion about how his search ends. What is the result of his questioning? Leaving this open makes the essay feel unfinished."

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