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Have you ever been to someplace in your life that was just so great you cant forget it There is always a place like that in everyones life and for me it was on a cruise Its not everyday that someone gets to go on a cruise because they are very expensive but you if you get a chance it will be something you wont soon forget Arriving in Los Angeles the pungent odor of old sea water and dead fish was not the greatest smell While in the parking lot gazing in the distance towards the water all that is noticeable is the numerous old run-down looking buildings but upon closer inspection you can see a reddish-blue fin charred peaking out from the tops of the buildings As you walk closer and closer you notice the ship getting bigger and bigger until finally you reach the boat It is massive like a skyscraper and stands over 100ft high and holds more than 2000 passengers As one looks on the outside you notice its not all that perfect with its whitish and blue warped paint from years in the ocean and rusty drip marks from every bolt along the bottom of the boat All you can wonder is what it is like inside When first walking inside the ship you notice how spacious and vivid it is Walking down the hallways and staircases lined with tiny vibrant lights you notice that it has over twelve floors two dining rooms a buffet twenty-four hour pizza and ice cream basketball court swimming pool four jacuzzis two theaters a casino child daycare gym and two miscellaneous rooms for eating drinking and dancing On the outside deck the musty smell of wet wood and chlorine fills the air while the sounds of children screaming and crying pierce your ears as they splash in the pool Going up another deck past the newly glossed wooden staircase you
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