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How the Internet Shaped Communication, Education, and Business

This essay describes usage of the internet as the technology became widespread in business, personal communication, and education, with discussion of remaining barriers to universal adoption in the late 1990s. The student highlights usage by university students and usage in a global world. The essay also includes reflective material on the writing process and rhetorical situation.
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Bridget's feedback:

"You've crafted a multifaceted discussion that helps the reader get a holistic view of the topic. The rhetorical analysis and reflective content before and after provide context and show sound metacognitive thinking. Continued work on a project like this may demand either reframing the discussion as a look back on a specific moment in time or updating the discussion; sections 1 and 5 offer good opportunities for the former.

The other main area of focus will be in the writing mechanics. Your flow, sentence variety, and syntax tend to be sound, so it looks like most of the work is in phrasing (e.g., prepositional phrases) and diction."

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