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By the time I woke up there was a big oxygen bag next to me which had a tube connected to a mask on my mouth It felt a little itchy I guess that was how I was wakened Later I was told that I passed out right after the Tibetans put on the Hatas on my neck in Tibetan airport I was embarrassed but more of it I was worried To most people it might seem like an adventurous trip to the highest plateau on the earth to me it was the primary resource gathering for my Extended essay on Dalai Lama and the Chinese communist party Being a Chinese writing my extended essay topic on something as controversial as this one is not always as easy I was told I was a nut when my Chinese friends found out I was researching his topic I was asked to talk to the school dean from the Chinese department when the school heard about my extended essay plan my parents gave me a two hours long lecture on how dangerous it could be on provoking the Chinese government by doing this topic However with all those difficulties and troubles I was finally here to wrap up my extended essay with primary resource Attended to a local primary school full of rocket scientists children the Chinese education system had a huge influence on me Always being obedient to the teachers the text books were 100 reliable and getting the final answer with fancy tactics in mathematics seemed to be the best way to prove ones intelligence However in the year 2004 I not only experienced a physical move to an International school but a total mental revolution Everything fixed was then questionable For the first time in my life I knew that the text books were not perfect in fact they were misguiding in some way I knew the Tiananmen square massacre from my
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