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The Pride of a Lion Cut your hair already several fifth graders yelled at me as they pushed me against the hard brick wall I tried to argue with them but there were to many of them and then one of them punched me in the gut I fell to the ground hard and started crying I remember feeling so confused trying to figure out what I had done to them People started crowding around in large numbers to see what was happening Almost all the kids laughed at me the older kids laughed because they were mean and the smaller ones laughed to fit in Luckily the bell rang and recess was over I was truly saved by the bell I had put it off for too long I had to tell some one such as my teacher and my parents about these bullies I went to the front of the class where my teachers desk was and complained to her about what had happened Some older kids were bullying me in the playground They told me to cut my hair You should cut your hair So much hair is disgusting she told me viciously I went to the back of the class room where my seat was and I started crying with anger not to those bullies or my teacher yet to myself for being so weird and so different I was now determined to cut my hair before the day was over because I could not take this any more Finally the long awaited moment had arrived the day was over and my mom and dad were waiting for me outside of the school to take me home My dad asked me how my day was so I told him about my horrifying day I told him about the teachers cruel comments and the fifth graders bullying me I told him that I just wanted to cut my hair
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