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Vanessa Garcia Period 1 February 19 2001 Creative Writing An Old Habit Pablo arrived at the church alone It was Saturday and Pablos best friend Miguel was getting married to Lupe Miguel had just turned thirty six and was in love She was only eighteen very attractive and somewhat flirty but Pablo was not sure that she truly loved Miguel With a nineteen year difference Pablo could not help but doubt their love Yet he knew that if it were he in Miguels place he would be getting married too The ceremony lasted forty-five minutes and then the rice the pictures and the congratulations As usual many of the families invited did not have transportation so Pablo being the gentleman he was volunteered his car He ended up taking one of the families that had been invited which consisted of the grandfather grandmother two young girls the husband and wife The husband Luis was about Pablos age During the ride over they talked Talking Pablo found out a lot about Luiss family He found out that the grandparents had been married for 50 years his wife was was a teacher and was the brides friend and that his two young daughters were in high school Adriana the youngest in 9th grade and Liliana in 12th grade In that moment that Luis was talking to Pablo about his daughters Pablo looked casually through the rear view mirror and for an instant lost all notion of reality He found himself with the innocent and attentive gaze of two intense green eyes Lilianas eyes Her eyes bedazzled him with their charm Minutes later they arrived to the hall where the reception was to take place It was an elegant place with chandeliers and roman pillars all around the hall that resembled the swimming area of Hearst Castle There was a band that mesmerized the guests with their romantic tunes Pablo greeted
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